AK 47

[johnb]

It was superior weapons the Germans had
that deeply affected this Soviet lad
Mikhail Kalashnikov had a dream
to create a weapon more supreme

Realising that dream took six years
to late to quell those German fears
easy to use, efficient, cheap
Soviet technology took a leap

Deployed in countries hot or cold
all other weapons easily outsold
soaking wet, It functions well
not a hint of acrid smell

The inner barrel is chrome plated
thus all residue eliminated
the Kalashnikov is very tough
owners first to run out of puff.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3VRrc2n0NXg&feature=related

[Dave Burgess]

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[johnb]

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thank you dave

[stephenfrank]

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Bit disappointed cause I wondered what you were going to rhyme with AK47 and you cheated by not using it. all I could think of were, heaven and Lord Bevan.

Out on a hunting trip strode Lord Bevan
At the time he was 87
He tripped and fell onto his AK47
Next thing he found himself floating in heaven

[johnb]

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Bit disappointed cause I wondered what you were going to rhyme with AK47 and you cheated by not using it. all I could think of were, heaven and Lord Bevan.

Out on a hunting trip strode Lord Bevan
At the time he was 87
He tripped and fell onto his AK47
Next thing he found himself floating in heaven

off topic and complete fantasy

bevan of national health fame was dead at 62 years of age and was never in the military-your poem is complete nonsense

[Pat Harley]

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Ooooooo!

[johnb]

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Ooooooo!

i am trying write 'informative poetry' which was how poetry started-reports on local wars
and personalities-you want to stay in fantasy land-keep reading the bible if you prefer fantasy-good luck Pat

[stephenfrank]

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off topic and complete fantasy

bevan of national health fame was dead at 62 years of age and was never in the military-your poem is complete nonsense

thank fxck for that. I'd hate to accidently write something that wasn't nonsense.

[bob9739]

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off topic and complete fantasy

bevan of national health fame was dead at 62 years of age and was never in the military-your poem is complete nonsense

Yes, but it sounds good doesn't it. And I bet there's a few Bevan boys who wish it were true !

[johnb]

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Yes, but it sounds good doesn't it. And I bet there's a few Bevan boys who wish it were true !

it will be a few by now

[johnb]

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thank fxck for that. I'd hate to accidently write something that wasn't nonsense.

no harm in trying-try doing it intentional-there is a first time for everthing